>>32283589Adorable.
>>32286890>>32286905I like the design, and I like how she's got a Sandstorm team going. Though Mantine is kind of the odd man out. Wonder what the story there is.
>>32297317I like it, except for the goggles. Or, at the very least, I'd want to see his eyes as well. Also, as a note, Pokeballs are typically minimized when you're not using them, so they wouldn't take up that much space. But you're a very good illustrator. Good work.
>>32298230Like other people said, make the shorts a bit wider at the hem.The little pouch on his hip seems odd, but not necessarily in a bad way. And, maybe make the vest and shirt separated more, give the impression that there's some space between them. I only bring it up because his shirt is riding up a little, which implies some motion or breeze, but the rest of it looks a little flat. Other than that, though, it's looking fine. You're mimicking the Sugimori style very well. What color were you thinking for his beanie?
>>32300516>>32300553I don't like the Growlithe's mohawk, but it at least makes sense for the rocker character. The Asian girl seems a little bland, next to the rest of the characters. She doesn't have anything that makes her stand our, aesthetically. All and all a nice looking party.
>>32300594>>32304150>>32306724So she's definitely a cute NEET, but I can't help but feel as though there's nothing that makes her a Pokemon OC. She's really just a regular character. Nothing about her background, personality, or interests has anything to do with Pokemon. Does she have any herself? Does she draw them? Did she ever try going on an adventure? Put her more in the setting. You could probably crib a little off of Hex Maniacs. That archetype lends itself to socially awkward recluses. Ghost types probably don't even need that much upkeep.
