>>41109494Fuck off. OP asked what he thought. He's never going to get better if he just listens to normies who know fucking nothing about how to draw, being critiqued is a good thing.
Get lost loser.
>>41109518>effortIts not about effort. Feathering is a shitty habit and will make anyone who's even a decent artist look at your art think you're shit. It a big sign that the artist is a novice. Look at even some of the sketches and gestures of more serious artists, yeah their lines are loser but there's no feathering.
Just pend an hour a day practicing your line work, till you stop feathering so much.
