>>42844017S-s-saved!?
Oh Anon, you shouldn't have!
If I wasn't off the fence before, I am now. I'll see what I can do to get some goodies forged up and ready. Glad to see this investment of mine was worth the effort.
>>42844337Truth be told, I had similar feelings. Though in earnest, it felt *in* character for the guy I was writing for. That said, I did tone down the swearing from before, and did so near the end since it was starting to feel a little old. It's been a long while since I had one of my characters swear like a little teenager.
On another note, I am thinking of either tackling that beedrill gal or continuing on with the quilava character next. More so the former, since that character will be interesting by the virtue of the fact they have *no* arms to work with. Still human in essence, but also very much a Pokemon with newfound instincts to deal with coupled with their human ones keep them down to earth, and struggling to live having no hands to work with should endear itself to some natural struggles and self identity.
Maybe protecting her little brother should do the trick. We'll see.
