>>51010190Didn't think anyone would would respond after so long, nice
>I think the main problem with these is that they look like just water creatures without a clear idea or concept behind them. That was actually part of the intention, I guess it was a bit of a mistake so say "based on" over "inspired by" There's actually another frogmon in the region that's by and large a themed cartoon frog, so I didn't want it to overlap too badly. They're not based on the frog life-cycle per se, they just both have traits of different stages of it. Sorry for the confusion.
Also the archerfish idea was suppose dot come across in the fanned tail specifically, as well as the trait of them being able to concentrate liquid venom and shoot it out of their mouths. I do agree it could have more on the visual side though, I'll work on it.
>Nice concept, but it's a bit harder to judge this design without seeing how it develops as it evolvesI understand, sorry about that
>The three heads are cute in a Dugtrio/Dodrio kinda way, but it's odd that they're just weirdly floating thereThey don't actually float, they're just suspended in the air as it's walking in the drawing. Don't blame you for not getting it though, I still have a long way to go as an artist
> I also think you could think more about it as a real creature, right now his body is constructed as a barrel with limbs sticking out, maybe make it look a little more like an actual body. It's actually an ancient artificial Pokemon ala Golurk. It's limbs are made of clay and bound by the shackles, so I wanted it to look a bit unnatural.
>Another small thing is I think it looks a bit too tall/big to be the first stage.It's evo is actually supposed to be relatively massive, so this one would be like the height of the average ten year old. Another thing caused by the lack of an evo pic, sorry.
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it a lot. I dunno if every change suggested wil come though, but I'll definitely run some by my partner.
