>>53844490>My guy your romance/sex writing is wish fulfillment garbageYep
>you get too edgy for the settingAah man, I was trying not to be edgy. The bad guys are bad guys and my villain is kind of emo, but I wasn't going for edgy. I guess I failed. I figured since this game has lewd scenes in it, I have a free pass to treat the bad guys little more seriouslty than pokemon normally dfoes. Like, when Jasmine says "some guy broke into my house at night" Cynthia just assumes the dude was going to assault her because I think that's what most people would assume a strange man breaking into a single woman's house would be there to do.
>and your battle system is shitYeah because it's not the focus. Honestly calling it a "system" at all is kind of an overstatement. I included battles as part of the story because it felt like pokemon battles are a major part of the setting, right? But I wasn't interested in making a full-on RPG, I didn't think there'd be interest. So what we end up with are these weird fight scenes where most of the time the outcome is determined ahead of time and the player's input doesn't really matter. So yeah, the battle system is shit. I could massively overhaul it, give the pokemon real stats and moves, give player more control, write failure conditions, maybe make winning matter a lot more to the story and the ending... but I just don't see the point. That's a huge amount of work for a game that's supposed to just be story focused. I figure if someone wants a good battle system they'll play a romhack or something.
>you occasionally have some good jokes/references and since I am also a Hoennbaby who liked the ranger games, 5/10.Thank you! For the first game I've ever made and the longest thing I've ever written in terms of word count, I'll gladly take 5/10. Side note, I'm not a Hoennbaby and I've never played Pokemon Ranger. I started with Gold and I only know anything about Pokemon Ranger from Jaiden Animations' video about it.
