>>55853186Nice edit, but I'm not really sure about some things about this image.
- The sweat drops and tears from the first two panels need to be edited out. They really bother me.
- During the second panel in the bottom left corner, while Kirlia is "unzipping" her dress, you can still see her green body from inside her dress.
- In the third panel in the top right, Kirlia is wearing what appears to be green tights, but then in the last panel in the bottom right, Kirlia is seen completely undressed and clearly not wearing the green tights. I'm not sure how this last point can be fixed, either remove the green parts of Kirlia's body from every panel or draw her green tights on the floor right next to her dress.