>>17230224I really like the approach you took writing this, how it kinda contrasts with the Kronii I wrote yesterday in a similar situation. The uncertainty she has when being pressured to turn the clock back for a few moments is cute. Her hesitation gives her another layer of character that isn't the usual, perfect woman, she has so ingrained to her character. On the other side, when Kronii does reveal her lust and becomes the one in the power role is pretty hot. I also liked reading the lore bits, they really settle you into the story.
For the sex bits, I kinda felt like I was reading a series of events. It's like sex in the bedroom, bathroom and bedroom again? It's not awful by any means, but it's not amazing either, it was just kind of there y'know? I think maybe if you choose to revisit something like this...describe what (you) are feeling, not just Kronii's reactions. Although, I do have to say, I certainly wouldn't mind being nursed by Kronii... So you did invoke my imagination for sure at some points!
Overall, good job senpai. I am left wanting a little more...but it's not a deal breaker for me. Thanks for sharing your secret work with us!