I'm satisfied with the attempt. I never really wrote stories. It's really hard to do your thoughts justice through text, A lot harder than I thought.
I didn't try to make it for cooming so if I write more I might do something like that. Good dialogue would be hard too. I might try to make shorter stuff next time but it was hard to make it satisfying without the fluff.
Pastebin because I don't know how to format effortposts /blog
https://pastebin.com/Ma8vhJbw 