>>12134343Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I'm glad you've continued to keep working on it.
While I don't watch Calli that much, her speech patterns seem a lot better suited now than in earlier chapters, and I like the connections you've drawn with various things she's mentioned in streams.
Like
>>12135222 anon mentioned, please treat
Towa kindly and don't make the
poor debiru into a being of unadulterated cringe. She's
chuuni, but she's not intolerably so in real life. On that note, I was a bit confused when she
repeated "~Hey! ~Hey! Human suckers~! Humans who love being fuckers~!" 4 times. It seemed out of place for her character and I wasn't really sure specifically why it was repeated. Maybe I'm just stupid.