>>95579527By the time I had this ready to be beta read it was already at 890ish. My beta reader said I should focus the rest of the wordcount on rounding out the dream concert to make the transition between scenes be less of a 'rush to the end'.
Though thinking about it, could probably have squeezed more explicit body dysmorphia in there if I cut out on the trying to be poetic/dramatic aspect bleeding through from the dream scene when it came to the awake bits.
