>>78823259>>78823312I would certainly give it a solid try if the writer would be consciously receptive towards the advice I give, but I would probably suggest to first create a full outline of what he wants to accomplish / what scenes he wants to write with the story, and then we could probably craft something more cohesive from there. If someone enjoys writing, I would want them to feel empowered to continue and feel like they can improve and are getting better, but the first step of that comes with recognizing your own current abilities if you have a base to look at. On that note I would probably also suggest to him to first start at stage 0 again by writing a completely unrelated one shot to better hone their skills and recognize the potential areas of improvement.
