>>72856566I definitely think the fight scene has been improved. It works better that their first actual interaction comes later on at the school anyway, so to me this is a positive change. I also think the ending is more nicely wrapped while getting your readers ready for the next part. Also try to keep in mind when you use the same words back to back, using a synonym makes the reading flow a little better.
Way to take the feedback and turn it into your stomping ground.
