>>16890545I'm sorry for making you tear up, but the fact that my writing managed to make that happened is incredible. Thank you for reading.
>>16885106Thank you so much for the feedback, I truly appreciate it.
Yeah my paragraphs are still awkward, I'm going to try to read a few books to see if I can learn how
It's a simple plot yeah, I mainly focused on expanding on their relationship with different events, I'll keep practicing
Thank you for the Bae comment, I'm glad I can write their personalities well
The feedback you provide means a lot to me, thank you again