>>36386234>Also I think the link to the Underworld rentry is not formatted correctlyOh, so it isn't! I broke it while fixing up other bits of formatting kek, thanks.
And yes, candified Moriji rainforests must be horribly sticky, luna chuubanite's native environment is in a continental to subarctic climate, so the molasses will be much stickier down here. Likely unpleasant...
>sounds of a living forestIt's so useful to use the other senses to set a scene, it's wild what it does to immersion. Normally I'm more of a smellfag, so I focused on sounds in this one. Though I kinda wish I'd described what candified blood smelled like now... Well, there'll be more opportunities.
>The world’s deadliest pogo stick!Your combat scenes were a huge inspiration! I hope I did justice to the Palkyrie's fighting style. That was one of the most fun parts to write (Alongside Shishov being a chuubanite nerd).
