>>82773907Well this was cute. The characters have a good dynamic and they bounce off each other really well. It also has a fun and lighthearted vibe, which I like. I agree with that other Anon that the feeding scene could use a bit more of a punch. Also, try and break up your dialog so that it's not just two people standing there yapping at each other.
Overall good stuff. Long live Suic
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