>>38253384Nice work /hag/bro. Classifying fighter classes based on voluptuousness makes perfect, and they're nicely differentiated. Big girls in heavy armor is my favorite thing in the universe, so I'm happy to read about the Shieldmaidens. The policies with POWs are also interesting and not something I've thought about a lot.
>>38363680Deserters don't get Valhalla, as mentioned in one of your previous stories. Cool detail.
>sled cannonsThe crazy shit you find in history... Were they taken off the sled before firing? Or the recoil just shot the sled twenty feet back?
>a bratty PalkyrieNice! I want the Palkyries to get even brattier. They're perfect for it.
I like how the differing lifespans are discussed. That's probably something I should bring up re: one of the longer lived mori priestesses.
Ah, dreamwalking for intel-gathering! A clear use-case for the ability. Looking forward to the next part.
Amazing prose as always! Your stuff motivates me to improve my writing.
>>38391577Good stuff anon. The BF would also add a clause that the Black Fleet vessels captured be returned, IE the corvettes and such. Civilian ships are not included in that. Not sure how much a Talent is worth, but I'm gonna assume these are reasonable numbers. Looking forward to the continuation.
