>>24883958I loved your fic! You had a great take with Kronii being the one to cheer IRyS up, then switching back to their usual teasing, that was super cute. I'm really bad at lore stuff so I'm happy you finished it!
I'm also bad at feedback but for Kronii's speech, it feels like you could maybe add in breaks at certain points, letting either of them do something or IRyS reacting in some ways to Kronii's speech, I'm certain I'm not explaining myself correctly ^^'.
After the speech you did it really well, getting their conversation to move along naturally adding actions here and there. Tbh you did great! I hope you can keep writing!
>>25049475I sure do love it when people assume I'd just randomly drop my main ship with no reason!
>>25049810I'm guessing you're the one who wrote that TimeRyS fic, right? When I started out my writing didn't get many views, x(You) or whatever. The most I got one time was like 30 lol. The point is that views shouldn't be what matters to you, it's keeping at it and writing for yourself, and maybe eventually for others that request something because they like your writing enough
Don't be discouraged, I hope to read more of your work down the line!
>>25058738Hope everything's alright
