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>Salt and Shadow (An Unknown Tomorrow)
God, I barely remember the marine dementia arc fics but man... This was really well executed. Honestly the only missed opportunity is not having more 'make the second reading hurt more' type hints in it but as it is, this was good.
>Meteor Trails
I liked it but man, this feels like the problem with low hanging fruit fics written out as an example. It's literally everything you'd expect in a short-form fic about being left behind by Suisei's ascent into stardom and plays it straight. I guess if I had to criticize, it would be in the fact that this feels like a quarter of a story, all set-up no pay-off, all while still feeling like it's in a prologue.
>Impromptu Sex Ed
Weird narration style aside (i.e no dialogue from the second person narration, and no use of You to denote your actions), this was actually pretty hot. Not fap worthy since the narration was fucking with me but it at least got me to half chub.
>A Boatload of Happiness
Cute, and low concept. Probably the best non-rrat ayame fic I've read. Though it's so by the book fluff it's almost bland.
>Hidden Sea, Buried Deep
Oh... This is the actual Marine dementia fic. Man. This still hits as hard as it did on release. Can't really say much more cause damn, this was good.
