>>49343112I'll keep the colors in mind next time. I'm utterly trash at drawing things myself as you probably saw by the handwriting. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapters! As for Chloe in the second part:
She is ultimately a girl who gets bullied and overworked by her team on a near daily basis, so someone that she thinks should have left her to rot showing her kindness and a helping hand goes a long way with her. She will still not hesitate to fight if given the order, since she does still think the way of HoloX is the best way to keep her freedom, but she at least likes and respects her adversary a little more now. >when he meets up with the others again he'll just tell them to run without asking questions.I hadn't thought of how exactly that interaction would go yet, but you gave me a pretty funny idea, thanks for that, and the feedback anon!
>>49343433Next chapter is going to be hagtastic. That's part of why I kept this one as 29 split into two parts. The big 30 should be all about the hags, and boy will it be! Old hags and new hags!
>>49344138Also want to echo this dude's words. This anon's right on so many levels. Never stop writing the stories you want to see. Be proud that they're YOURS, and keep riding. You'll only get closer to that view you want to see from the top with every sentence you write.
