>>61291317>Brown, Black, and Blue Because I Love Youit read well and it's not just senseless torture, even tho I'm not rlly sure what Noel's motivation is, and some decisions Lamy makes are questionable and kind of led to everything becoming worse. i imagine Flare isn't so totally dumb she thought just requesting nicely to break-up would work.
i also liked (dislike?) the implication where Noel likely followed thru with her promise, and with Lamy at the minimum dropping out even if it's a little generic for a downer ending
>Watson's Tests it's formatted very well, short but sweet, and i like the concept and setting in general
i think in terms of writing it's the best one i've seen in a while, following anon's perspective and mental shift and everything, ame seems deranged but still loving i know many people who'd love that
