>>79183262Thanks for the shout-out! It was fun to help you out, and seeing a chapter again after some finishing touches have been applied is always a treat.
>Starducks
>Sensible_chuckle.gifThe dynamic between the Promise girls is always fun to read, I especially liked Mooms the best out of the pack. To then directly contrast with Anon and his workplace friend group is a chef's kiss moment. Overall I am enjoying the ride and build up for this zoomin rat's love story.
I did notice a few "i"s that need their big boy pants put on, but you can catch those real quick with another pass. As for the idea of or re-writing your earlier chapters, not that I think there is anything wrong with them as they are, but I feel you on how you want to give them a tune up after you've come further as a writer. I definitely encourage you to do so when it strikes you, as it's a fun little exercise and helps give your creation the polish you know it deserves. Nice going again, I look forward to the continuation and what comes next.