>>57700062Botan wasn't mentioned anywhere in the scene, and the resulting scene is Civia and Watame. That's what gave me the impression.
For the bucket thing, even if it was Fauna's personality somehow seeping into Civia's consciousness, there wasn't any proper conveyance of that, also why on earth would she think it was a good idea to imitate the person who just died?
As for the rest of the chapter, the action scenes had a good amount of conveyance to them, the character interactions are kinda showing off how some things are deeper in your head than what makes it to paper. The thing with ayame, while Anon had an appropriate reaction, where did Ayame's infatuation come from that she's throwing out the L word all of a sudden? While on the topic of anon
>Do you know why she (botan) is so upset with me?Does he not remember the argument they just had in the last chapter? If it was resolved already that would be one thing, but that conversation didn't come till alter in the chapter. I get and respect that you're jazzed up about seeing this story to the completion on the horizon, but I think your speed is hurting you here.
