>>62755160>>62755414Appreciate the input. I may as well keep it as is in that case, I was just unsure if the reader would get annoyed at the narrative constantly bouncing between stories.
>>62755998Throughout the whole story (not just the chatper I'm working on) there will be a lot of shifts between different time periods to slowly build up the setting and characters, but I don't think I could do a proper reverse chronological story. Seems out of my league.
>>62756783>Spoiler