>>76166826 (me)That was a pretty good batch. I'm gonna start with the shorter ones.
>A wandering pairReally short and sweet, I really love the banter with my funny fennec. Life on the road with Polka is definitely what fantasies are made of, which I may likely be biased about. Great work with this one!
>Hospital guestReally cute. I liked how this anon carried himself, and the interaction between him and Zeta was fun and wholesome.
>Three Golden minutesVery cute and the message with the title drop was expertly done. I enjoy hearing about a happy family rat, and awesome reference with papa rat and the fight you had to take Bae's hand.
>Masked PrincessShort and a cool potential intro to something more. Was smooth to read, sorry I don't got much more than that.
>StitchingAnother cute one, the banter between anon and Ollie is fun. The idea she's a monster hunter getting battered up and coming to you for treatment is adorable. I'd love to read about one of the tussles she got into.
>Medieval SynthesisFirst off, the interaction and bouncing back and forth flows really well and is pretty entertaining. You really nail the exasperation struggles of a teacher with trouble children. The students just interacting with the lesson in their own ways was fun to go through and how the conversation got off topic in the end was pretty natural. I didn't go in expecting to like it, but I'm glad I read it
>Shu-Ba-Oh! - Destined RivalsThis was a delightful read overall. I'm a huge fan of getting overexcited about card games, and shuuba was the perfect actress for this. The cozy spring break vibes also hit a lot of good neruons for me.
The "tutorial" of the game went pretty smooth, and could be taken out of your usual game intro episode. The chuuni chants were probably one of my favorite parts. The presentation of the cards themselves was also easy to follow.
I really like this concept and will look forward to seeing a friendship blossom and grow from card games.
>A White December: Chapter TwoOverall the first half of this one was pretty messy. Everyone is acting too soft to be drill sergeants, and I'm questioning what kind of academy this is, since as of right now it's basically a girl's boarding school you would send problem children too. The military needs an actual mission statement to be presented so the recruits know what the hell they are going to be molded into. Without even a surface level feel for the purpose of this academy or the stakes involved, it's pretty hard to get invested in what reads like a bunch of chuubas in military uniform gearing up to molest Sora at some point.
>Date Practice GOD. This fuels my fire for funny fennec romance. It was cute, awkward, and had all the fluff I could want out of a piece like this. How Polka conducted herself throughout was pretty spot on. This was rad and an inspirational gift. Thanks anon.
Thanks for the wonderful meals to come back to bros. If I missed any stories or any authors want to get some more feedback, just say the word!