>>59918149well for me its because im horny that i can picture the scenario more vividly and add the juicy details.
I wrote some parts of ruffling feathers while not horny and i found myself coming back to change them because once i was horny i was like "this isnt enough to keep me here". Specifically the blowjob scene had me going like thrice over it because i kept going "ok but this isnt hot enough". The end goal should be "holy shit i want to cum" not "i want to move on so i can cum"