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>it's a hunted house with jumpscares
>it will be just us immersed
That didn't age well
>4 people hovering around talking
>fil making no attempt at RPing into the atmosphere
>while playing the ceo video to give background info and set the mood the everyone just talk over it
>sound balancing fucked
>constantly trying to be both funny and scary
>every female model is a porn avatar
>supporting cast kept trying to be the center of attention instead of letting the streamers experiance the world
>here is (this person/room) that doesn't have a punchline and never influences the rest of the plot snd doesn't drive the plot foralward at all
>some avatars have shader errors in the world, how do you not check this
>plot
>tour of vtuber corp
>see vtubers in training (40 minutes of 1h15)
>meet ceo
>lights go off for no reason
>follow him to lab
>show more funny vtubers on beds
Scary part is from 2h to
>monster escapes
>run through empty coredore
>Vtubers attack
>stay in room, monster peeks around corner
>get cornered by monsters
>lol hope you enjoyed today
Whoever wrote this sucked and doesn't know the first thing about writing,
There was no buildup, no atmosphere, it looked more like a strip club than something scary, the background characters kept attention whoring by trying to do jokes or changing avatars instead of giving the streamers a gap to react, especially the pink shirt guy loudly trying to make jokes with fil and saru and talks over the robot mask dude who's trying to actualy do the plot
Even chat was talking about how bad it was because all the people were talking over each other the camera sucked
Even at the climax of the scary part they insert shitty jokes ruining what little atmosphere they created
>I didn't want to make it scary from the start because it would have been boring
YOU'RE SUPOSED TO BUILD UP TO IT NOT JUST SHOW RANDOM SCENES AND THE SUDENLY SWITCH TO LOL NOW ITS SCARY
I the entire thing the part where they even tried to be scary was 1 dark coredore lasting 20 seconds with 1 jumpscare.
Compared to what was advertised, this was the worst stream I've seen in 2 years since vsj tried to show collabs on their own channel and I'm now legit mad sarus last stream before she left was cut short for this bullshit. Saru better have just been nice when she said it was good otherwise I have no hope for her signalis ai rp
>fillian: it was interesting but there's a lot of stuff that can be improved on
Yeah, fire the writer, fire all the actors who want to be the main character
I'm too mad to properly format this so however it turns out is how it turns out