>>53971662Dusk that follows an autumn day has been deleted from the archive and isn't on the author's AO3. Fortunately, we have the mega hard archive.
Like most of weirdanonv2's works, the sensitive fetish portrayed here is handled so clumsily that I can't help but feel it's intentional for comedic effect, so that's how I'm going to perceive it. I mean, she gets a tattoo that makes her a cock magnet for black guys and starts fucking everyone that makes a move on her? And of course she suggests playing basketball, too. Almost surprised this story didn't end up in a cotton field or banana plantation at some point.
Anyway, whilst the dialogue is extremely blunt and stilted, the smut is actually well-written with erotic intent in mind rather than simply describing what's happening; I imagine if you're into raceplay NTR you could rub a fair few loads out to this story.
I'm not into either of those things, though, so it didn't especially do much for me, but kudos otherwise. Honestly, it was more of a comedy than anything - I wanted to keep reading just to find out how ridiculous things were going to get. It had an air of self-awareness about it that made it delicious, written seriously enough to be inflammatory but simultaneously aware of how silly it is.
I enjoyed reading it. The fetishes in the smut side were a total mismatch for me, though, so I probably won't be reading it as wank fodder anytime soon.
