>>62685880Thank you for taking the time to read the fic, anon, and I'm glad you liked it.
Line breaks have really been my problem even back with Egregiously Forbidden Relationship. I haven't gotten quite used to them yet. I was thinking of breaking up the scenes with stuff like, 'Hoshimachi Residence, 9:30 pm' or something, though I was afraid it'd either break the story too much or make it feel like a detective novel.
As for the Dolphin Hotel,
it's the hotel in the Murakami book 'Dance, Dance, Dance.' I recommend reading it if you have the time.