>>51767102It's tough. When I looking around for ways to do Pomu's journal, I found out how finicky gdocs can be with images. I eventually got it to look okay, and I'm pretty proud of it, but it took some effort with no shortage of trial and error. There might be better ways to do it, but I currently don't know those ways. I also seem to remember the published version of a doc looking vastly different spacing wise with the image than it did in edit mode, so there's that too.
>>51761654Not either of those anons but there's another piece of feedback I remembered while reading your latest chapters, but forgot in my initial post. The part about anon's eyes, turning yellow, it reads a looking awkward since we are back with the (You) perspective. I get what you wanted to showcase there, but it might have made more sense if you did something along the lines of "Your vision suddenly became encased in a yellow tinge" or something.
