>>33098057>>33099173>>33099775Yeah, looking at it now I fell for the Vince Russo trap of thinking a breakneck swerve is an acceptable for a story. I guess both didn't want it to languish in WIP hell if I spent too long on it and jut wanted to get to cunny as quick as possible. Maybe I'll work on that middle section at some point, I have a few ideas.
Thanks for giving it a read!
