>>54393992Very nice, however some critiques
First, instead of "the discord" just use "discord" to keep the syllable pace and instead of "roll the bait" go for "post the bait" since it makes more sense and will keep the pacing
Then, for "/hlgg/ choirs singin'" you'd be better off just doing "hololive global's choir's are singin'" because the former is only four syllables while the song uses five for "Roman cavalry choir's are singin'"
Other than those, absolutely excellent work