>>36292540Excellent! Very cute. Given the lack of tags I imagine it's supposed to be a shock fic, but since you've been asking pointed questions about flies recently...
Well-written with a surprisingly empathetic twist. I had expected it to be more focused on comedy, but the against-the-odds lovers kind of thing going on here managed to get a sympathy response out of me.
It was about as long as it needed to be, too! Although, it IS missing one critical scene -
they really should have consummated that marriage, damn it. Since she's got a bun in the oven, her ass was primed and ready to receive fly children. 