>>72791156>>72792004>>72793050thanks all.
regrettably it now must be censored for reupload to a certain site. can't think of any place I could share it uncensored, obviously. so it'll live here until the link naturally dies off.
>I actually like you gave the the guy a likeable personality didn't want to hurt Robo Gurafunny you mention that. originally I tried going for a kinda thoughtless protag and it just felt wrong, couldn't follow through on it.
I went back and redid the dialogue and changed the direction of the outcome.
didn't think a conscience would kick in but I'm glad it worked out.