>>13548254>https://vm.tiktok.com/ZM8GW11c8/Why the fuck did this turn my tiktok into Norwegian?
I like it. Nice pacing, edits aren't overblown, and you have your link on screen.
However - having a transparency of your face over the top made seeing the details a bit harder? I'd consider popping a cutout of your face on the top of the screen, lke in the attached? Especially as you've got fade-to-black on both top/bottom of the game screen