>>32455031Ok, I will give economical feedback
>Nicely laid out and understandable.>Could use some work to make it less of a list. I can feel the lack of enthusiasm from this, not that i blame you.>Would be nice to have these greater regions mentioned have actual names in my opinion.I feel like you did a good job at getting what you needed down, but I am sure you will find that this needs further refinement. That is ok and something we all should strive for. As a whole, the foundation for further development, likely from someone else, is there. The taxation and trade things are something I feel like you personally want to expand on more but haven't given what you are interested in (I am assuming you are emma.)
Keep up the good work. Both of you have worked magic with this lore doc and I can tell that you put the hard work into it for success. Nothing that I listed as a problem is a fatal flaw either.