>>72815596thank you for your feedback. this is probably the last time I trust grammarly for shit.
as for your other points,
I wasn't aware font and line spacing played that big of a factor in things like that. i'll have to fiddle with the setting some. As for the first fight scene was intended to more display how much stronger kurokami is compared to grunts, thus being able to take them out under 30 seconds, as counted by Yuki. The end, like wise, is supposed to be the hook to display the next enemy, and thus, part 2 will show how kurokami faces a tougher opponent with chuuni powers as well. 