>>47222349That's not the writing we're talking about. They clearly have real affection for our girls, but they put precisely PISS effort into their actual story or narrative or worldbuilding or ANYTHING besides references, really.
This is unironically the most common mistake for novice writers. You see it a lot in fanfiction, and in Gaia Online, and also in Disney Star Wars
but I repeat myself: They take out their downloaded pdf character sheets and draw up what they think is this superawesome coolest most badass characters OF ALL TIEM... and they fail to come up with anything interesting for them to actually 'DO'. they just kind of stand around being told how awesome they are until they fuck each other, then just let it die halfway through.
This COULD have been something. But it wasn't and that wasted potential is annoying.