>>39892210Yeah, I don't mind ellipse loops all that much. Generally, when it comes to formatting, so long as she's not using reddit spacing for every single thought and is properly separating dialogue and actions, I don't really care about it too much.
Here's a general gauge of her responses throughout our reading. It very slowly got better and better as I flooded her context window with less of what she had to say and more of my descriptions. Obviously, I am cherrypicking the best responses at this point in time as well, so you're not seeing her most egregious responses, though it will help you to understand the things that she was looping with at this point from what is highlighted.