>>67762281Thanks for compliments! I wasn't looking for anything in particular, as it seems I was just mainly second guessing myself beyond the 'looks good, could use some more' I initially felt.
I've been wanting to use some of the Sugar Lyric girls for a while now, and she seemed like a great fit for the idea I had.
Rene would have been an uphill battle because I don't know how long I could write about her without it leading to sex>>67764830Thank you! I think you're right in that a scene to better explain what's going on with Anon's current mission would do some good. I might add an actual scene with Polka as well, and leave the Botan and Nene one for the end.