Jesus Christ, after taking some time to step away from the keyboard and sleep, re-reading this is a nightmare. I hate it. This is why I shouldn't give myself deadlines.
>>39616841Shit, I forgot to clarify last time too. This is rrat!Ayame.
>>39622404She's very fun to write, sluts are too powerful.
>>39624294Thank you Anon, I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't the best. And yeah, Mark is a lad.
>>39624408>SpoilerThat was actually a plotline completely unique to this special. I hadn't planned it at all in the original series, but I guess it's now canon.>>39630448>well, once I got over your weird obsession with caking everything in cum, this struck me as a very cute piece.Yeah... that might have been over the top just to convey the copious amounts of sex they have.
I still find it super fucking hot though.>The plot had a few holes when you think about itAh fuck, it did? I must have missed them in my race to get it done. What were they?
Either way thanks for reading, I appreciate it.
>SpoilerHmm...
>>39617366While I understand releasing it like this for the sake of the joke, I feel it didn't land all too well. Should I spoiler this?
The actual story itself isn't bad though, like the other Anon said I do like seeing people come up with their own rules and worlds and then exploring them. I also think more/longer interactions and dialogue between Anon and Aqua sprinkled in would have helped because the story felt a bit, for lack of a better word, silent. I can't say much else since I don't know what you have in store, but I'm curious about this contact thing and whatever the fuck territory is, unless I'm retarded and missed the explanation. 