>>76176371Gotcha. I'll keep trying to fine tune it. I'm taking my time with chapter three because this next chapter is going to be her "getting use to" military life so I want to make that into a believable transition without going too fast or two slow. Good news is I did read some rather humorous stories form people who server so I'll be incorporating those into it as well. One anon in the last thread put it quite perfectly: military life is 98% workplace comedy, 2% fear and terror. I will definitely try to reflect that.
I'll try to work in what you said, especially about the trip. It could lend some good bonding moments. And thank you for the advice, it's invaluable as usual. I'll continue to take my time with chapter 3 so it can have enough time to cook.
