>>37991192Pure fucking kino! Better than anything I ever wrote, you definitely have a knack for this.
Don't really have any input or complaints, you nicely summarized each faction you introduced, and I love the little anecdotes I guess we could call them, at the start of each of them.
All that's left to do now is to post it in the worldbuilding General and reap the (you)'s it will bring you. There's an anchor post right under the OP, reply to that, say under which thread you want it archived and you're done!
