>>35978961>The heat feels nice on my large round breasts and my perky nipples, as well as my shaven vagina(the hair gets kind of itchy sometimes)Women don't talk like this. Other than my one gripe, this was a very interesting experiment and was well written for what you were trying to convey. For the next part, I think you should make Chloe more afraid of the ghost(s) until she gets mindbroken by them. But that's just my preference talking.
