>>61291317>Holofanta/ss/yboth it and the sequel are dead
thank god cause those tags ahd me not looking forward to reading that>Miss SakuraI don't hate it, but I think I said back when it first came out it kinda misses the mark for what I'd want out of a Miko romance fic and HCAnon's aversion to using Japanese suffixes really makes the protagonist's dialogue sound worse than it is
>Mumei at the WindowsillThe sort of clinical way the narration goes kinda messes with the drama and heart-string tugging I think the fic is going for, though the ideas of it work overtime for that. The idea of an invalid mother watching her son fall down the stairs and maybe get seriously hurt deserves a bit more than single paragraph, similar thing to the ending.
>Moving on.Not too much to talk about, though it is interesting in that I don't think there's another chuuba whose leaving would spawn as much stuff around her leaving like Coco did, though maybe that's cause she was able to have a much more graceful exit than most and the circumstances around it gave her a lot of goodwill afterwards.
My reviews sound a lot more negative than I feel, I don't think any of these fic are bad by any means
