>>17523121Yeah, I mean I probably wouldn't have included it anyway, but the requester did specifically say not to. Thanks for the compliments!
>>17523515Hmm, I do see both your points. The first one may be in part to my brain having the violence on action mode rather than it being passionate due to some other things I'm writing.
The aftercare was meant to lead into a timeskip where it seems like you're relationship with Mori has improved, but she's still noticeably jumpy. I decided that was going a bit too far past what the idea was and stopped. Though, I definitelyshould have fleshed out what I left.Really I think the biggest thing I should take away is that Ryona isn't just an alternate term for abuse.
>>17524166Hey, I'm glad you liked it! I haven't written a legitimate request in a while, so it's glad to know I didn't disappoint.
Mori love indeed 