>>35257083Working on chapter 2 now that I finished both parts of chapter 1 of my long story. It's an adventure fantasy story I've been outlining with holos, magic, elemental spirits, and a lot of world exploration planned down the road.
Which by the way I think I'm ready to share chapter 1 for feedback. I broke it up into two parts since together it was just a bit too long.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTCoHZQC0Vry3i4b8mdlEhGoH-x8pe9NbB8-eZD-hxKspQl57RGAPw8e_uNRfZS7ovC_8whQx7rwW1a/pub - part 1
Tags: SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRTj2q-U3fzaBhMquktqG4kQhXIZlgUjFAAeQKag98np_VdiGCG5DeHrUpOtb0zQmP6TN-KWJ157IyY/pub - part 2
Tags: Watame, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy
It's been years since I've written any fanfics so please let me know how I can improve, if my spacing sucks or anything else you can think of. I had a lot of fun outlining and writing it out fully so I hope it will be fun to read for others.