>>69009036Thats for White Day
>>69010738I'm always worried about writing Marine a bit too slapstick when it comes to her antics so I'm glad to hear it went over well. Thanks for reading, glad you liked it
>>69011338I agree with you actually. It's not quite a comedy but a bit too bizarre to not have some sort of tag imo. So I split the difference. I wanted to keep this short (under 5k) and have it be more fluff than funny, so I didn't stuff it full of gags. Probably should have though. Thanks for reading and the feedback
>>69012644>spoilerAll my stories have happy endings, that's my writer's guarantee 