>>43606965Action scenes are not easy to get the hang of. Try not to get too discouraged with how your progress looks in terms of word or page count. Try to focus on how each interaction, every swing of the arms, and every movement of legs reads and feels, and how it paints the picture in your head. You got me curious and looking forward to reading why the doog and oni are fighting and what that would look like. Do you best anon! You can make the scene in your head shine.
