>>12545080At least now I have a general idea of what not to do when making accents so any future sailing should go easier. As per the surrounding world, I fear that I may have lost my chance to explain it without any heavy expositional dialogue. I was supposed to have done it in chapter 1, and I even tried it a bit on chapter 3.5 but I didn't feel like it would've worked. I have two options, to either focus more on the description of the surrounding area and add information bit by bit, or to make an extra chapter seperate from the story about the experience of one of the chuubas to understanding this new world. Both seem a bit odd to do, but the latter is looking a bit more tasty, as I can add way more info into it. Thank you for reading.
>>12547150Was it? I thought there was tons of plot progression, though sure, there's no action. Chapter 3.5 was all talk and no development for example.
