>>16814791Maybe the real issue is that you're telling us(and inadvertently, yourself) that you "can't" improve. Now I'm not saying that your efforts have not been in vain nor are your experiences invalidated, rather you tell yourself that you've hit your supposed limit on your capabilities, and by saying you can't improve you create a self fulfilling prophecy.
If you want serious advice, read, notice, copy and adapt the methods of how other authors write their stories, be it their prose, characterization, dialogue, etc. If you want a more self conforming answer, stop giving a shit to what people say in this thread. Write for your own enjoyment, and learn stuff at your own pace. Or stop writing, and do something else productive. Will this help you in writing? Perhaps not. But it will make you feel better about yourself by not being a little bitch when random people say shit about you online. It's up to you whether you wanna take this advice or not.